Saturday, March 15, 2008

Lock and Load

Bo Fexler has a past. I have no intention of sitting down and explaining her past, in the novel or otherwise. She maintains that she doesn't like to talk about it. But I do refer to it in snippets and lines. Things that give glimpses and show a backstory without stopping the current story to extrapolate.

It's like that one line from Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back. Han Solo announces that he's leaving. Leia thought he'd changed his mind. To which, Han replies, "Well, that bounty hunter on Ord Mandel changed my mind." A single line. No further explanation. But yet, the audience gets loads from that one line. They were on Ord Mandel. Han ran into a bounty hunter-- I even conclude that it was an unpleasant and dangerous exchange. And it affected him. So much information is so small of a line.

Loaded lines. Even more potent than loaded words.


  • Story in progress: Hit Woman
  • Current Song: Here Comes the Sun, by the Beatles. (And maybe someday soon the sun will come out here in the Mitten-shaped state!)

2 comments:

pattinase (abbott) said...

Pretty damned cold here but a bit sunny. It could be worse and probably will be soon.

Clair D. said...

It actually hasn't been that cold this winter... which is why we had so very much snow. I think I like the bitter, bone chilling cold more than ever-renewing mountains of snow. Ah well, at least the snow is melting and spring will come eventually.